Down in the dungeons.. POEM

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down in the dungeon
where darkness prevails
down in the dungeon
no nightingale hails

down in the dungeon
you will be on your own
down in the dungeon
you are yet not alone

down in the dungeon
where dangers await
down in the dungeon
linger- and soon it´s too late!

down in the dungeon
where shadows weep
down in the dungeon
don´t fall asleep

down in the dungeon
pits are so deep
down in the dungeon
keys you should keep

down in the dungeon
dust dust and moans
down in the dungeon
stones stones and bones

down in the dungeon
I tell you, poison´s for sure
down in the dungeon
no joke - must find a cure

down in the dungeon
time is not time
down in the dungeon
dime is not dime

down in the dungeon
walls close, spin and shift
down in the dungeon
you have to be determined and swift

down in the dungeon
the death knights rattle
down in the dungeon
you have to battle!

down in the dungeon
believe it - or not
down in the dungeon
there are things that deceive - omg!

down in the dungeon
*hu-hu* *hu-hu* - what the heck?
down in the dungeon
thieving gigglers! watch your back

down in the dungeon
keep an eye on the ground
down in the dungeon
for traps are abound

down in the dungeon
step lightly around
down in the dungeon
hush! don´t make a sound

down in the dungeon
strange enough- it´s fun
down in the dungeon
either to idle or to run

down in the dungeon
you are walking bait
down in the dungeon
stalking monsters await

down in the dungeon
please don´t go astray
down in the dungeon
better instead: save the day

down in the dungeon
some go for speed
down in the dungeon
anyway: hope you succeed

[PadTheMad]

Very clever stuff! I like it, well done

[beowuuf]

Yeah, some funny couplets there zoom

[Sera]

hmm, nicely written poem... is this a particular dungeon youre thinking of? or just dungeons in general? poison was mentioned, first thing that came to mind? conflux o.o

[zoom]

thanks
- and sera . yup I did implement poision partly because of conflux.
basically it´s dungeon master.
Some lines should switch order (for instance the death knight into 2ndline..(and thieving gigglers would be better if it was giggling thieves... (
The dime time part is not easy to understand, maybe I should add a suggestion from sophia: time is not time -- I don´t know what to rhyme.
But most likely I will just leave it as is..dunno.